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06 February 2006 @ 03:25 pm
A little Blaise/Hermione ficlet  
This is the first ever fic of any kind I have ever posted! Please be nice and love me, even if this isn't so great!
*is wibbling*


Blaise leaned languidly in the doorway, silently willing her not to turn around. The aforementioned she was working diligently on something at her desk, standing with her back to the door, bending forward over a pile of paperwork.

Blaise ogled her shapely arse, imagining all the naughty things he'd like to be doing to this prim little witch. He'd never done more than flirt lightly with her, and she'd dismissed every little comment he'd made thus far. She was starting to make him question his wooing abilities. He couldn't have that.

By gods he was going to change that today. She might slap him, hell, she might yell at him, but at least he'd know where he stood.

Blaise advanced toward Hermione's inclined form, stealthily drawing nearer to her backside. Gods, she had no idea what she was doing to him. He could already feel the strain against his trouser zip.

He stepped within 2 feet of her, and she still hadn't sensed his presence. Blaise was beginning to wonder if Hermione had been working too hard. Well, he knew she worked too hard, but to be so absorbed in your work that you can’t sense when another person has entered the room? She hadn’t even turned her head once. Well, he’d just have to help her learn to keep her guard up.

Blaise closed the little remaining space between them and tilted his lean form over Hermione’s, mimicking her positioning, bringing his mouth to her left ear.

“Granger,” he whispered huskily into her ear, do you know how long I’ve been standing in your doorway?”

Hermione jumped, well as much as Blaise’s stretched form would allow. “Zabini,” she hissed, “What are you doing?” Let me up!” Her eyes were seething, but beneath Blaise could see a cloud of confusion, and was that a hint of lust? He’d just have to test the waters.

Blaise leaned farther over her back, slowly running both hands along her arms before effectively trapping Hermione beneath him. “I’ll ask again, do you know how long I’ve been in your doorway, watching you work so diligently, Granger?” He mumbled these words into her ear, and was satisfied to feel a shiver course through her body.

“Am I frightening you? Perhaps you should be a little more careful when you work this late. Do I need to teach you how to properly protect yourself? You had your back to the door, anyone could have walked in and attacked you,” he continued.
“You mean like you have?” Hermione tilted her head to the side, brushing her nose with his lips lightly, a peculiar gleam in her eyes. She was still trapped beneath his strong form, but somehow she’d turned the tables. Blaise held her gaze steadily, trying to imagine what was going through that pretty head of hers.

Still never breaking eye contact, Hermione began slowly, scooting herself back. She swayed her hips back and forth, creating a delicious friction between her arse and his growing erection. “What is that, pray tell, Mr. Zabini? Is that part of your lesson?”

The little minx was toying with him. Blaise gripped the desk firmly, willing himself not to lose control. Easier said than done.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Hermione was having trouble controlling herself. Yes, she noticed him standing in the doorway. She couldn’t be sure when she first realized Zabini was standing there, but she felt his presence when he began moving into the room.

She had been doing her best to avoid the sexy git for the better part of a year. He was incorrigible, that’s for damn sure. Always flirting. Always finding a reason to touch her arm. Her hair. Her face. What gives? Zabini is a known player, so why the interest in her? Hermione certainly hadn’t done anything to lead him on. Okay, so maybe he’s the definition of sex, but that still doesn’t explain why he would want her?

Even now, Hermione was doing her best to avoid him. In her mind, she imagined that he would come in, say something suggestive, perhaps push a stray strand of hair behind her ear, and eventually leave when she didn’t give him any reason to stay. Well, boy did he surprise her. He’d circled his (oh gods, his arms!) around her, trapping her to her own desk. Blaise changed the game. It was time for Hermione to show him a little game of her own.

~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~


It's not even finished, because I lost my inspiration (this has a lot to do with the fact that someone just walked into my office, and that someone was a total buzzkill). Perhaps I will continue this in a later post. Hope what I have is okay. (I didn't even get this betaed, because I was afraid I would chicken out and not post it at all!)
 
 
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Tam: Cupid/Psyche ~ Bouguereautamlane on February 6th, 2006 09:27 pm (UTC)
OH MY GOD! YOU ARE CRAZY WOMAN! Why, in the name of JESUS MARY AND JOSEPH, are you insecure about your writing? I just. I think I need to smack you around a bit now. *smacks* FINISH IT! FINISH IT!!!

“Am I frightening you? Perhaps you should be a little more careful when you work this late. Do I need to teach you how to properly protect yourself?"
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“What is that, pray tell, Mr. Zabini? Is that part of your lesson?”
OMG BURN! Hahahahha! I love to watch Zabini work it. But holy fucking hell, I love to see the man get owned. XD

You write the tension in a MOST delicious way, my dear. Pls to be finishing. STAT. ♥
I AM  YOUR WIFE!: Adam - WOWeckerlilas on February 6th, 2006 10:00 pm (UTC)
Really? I mean, you honestly thought that was okay? Yes, I am totally insecure, you hit the nail on the head.

I will finish it. I just got home, give me some time to get back in the mood *wink*

OMG! I got a keymash from Becky! *dies* You just made my life.

Blaise is totally owned here. I've always pictured this scenario, and finally I am letting it play out for all the world my flist to see.

I wrote this in less than 30 minutes, so please be excusing the mistakes.

I love you!
*snogs*
I AM  YOUR WIFE!: Own Meeckerlilas on February 6th, 2006 10:05 pm (UTC)
Oh yes...and I like it when you smack me around like that. Puts me in the mood. *smirk*

Dirrrty dirrrty girl.
Elanorelanor_sarah on February 6th, 2006 09:51 pm (UTC)
That's very good for your first one! I'm intruiged and want to read on. If you're serious I'd try and find a beta reader, stuff like:

The aforementioned she was working diligently on something at her desk

just doesn't quite flow as easily as it could (it's the 'she')- but those are fairly minor issues in a good fic!! CARRY ON!
I AM  YOUR WIFE!: Hermione - interhouse unityeckerlilas on February 6th, 2006 10:04 pm (UTC)
Thanks luv! I am so insecure that I would have chickened out if I hadn't just gone ahead and posted that bit. I have many beta reading friends (I myself beta read), so I will be sure to send them out betaed in the future. I had to send this one out immediately or I may never have posted anything. Trust me on this.

And I totally agree with your comment about that sentence. I hated it really, just couldn't be arsed to do anything about it. And as I said to Tam, I wrote this bit in less than 30 minutes, so please to be forgiving any errors! *grin*

I hope to post the rest later today!

Thanks again for your thoughts! *hugs*
Elanorelanor_sarah on February 6th, 2006 10:13 pm (UTC)
No seriously, it's good and I myself often post without a beta- I find as you write more you get better at sentances flowing- it's only minor and this was good!
I AM  YOUR WIFE!: Adam Brody smileeckerlilas on February 6th, 2006 10:25 pm (UTC)
I appreciate that. And most of all, I appreciate your honesty. Everyone needs a good beta, so I know exactly what you mean.

I'm glad you liked it!

*hugs*
Britt: HP Hermione Smirkbritt_1975 on February 6th, 2006 10:13 pm (UTC)
YAY!!!

*squee*

*pant*

*waits for more*

That was so good!!! I completely agree that sometimes it's easier to just push it out there, close your eyes and hold your breath. Betas are great, and I've got a few...but there are times when I just want feedback on the general idea.

I think you've got a really great piece here that just screams to be fleshed (*snerk*) out. :-))

*loves*
I AM  YOUR WIFE!eckerlilas on February 6th, 2006 10:23 pm (UTC)
Thanks so much! You have no idea what your approval means to me!

I was so scared to post this. I know it's silly, but I am trying to get brave. Hey, it was bravery that allowed me to post this much. I have plenty of friends who beta, and I'm sure I'll ask them to help me out in the future.

Hehe. fleshed out. *grin*

*loves back*
zaralya on February 6th, 2006 11:06 pm (UTC)
OH GOD, YOU'VE GOT TO FINISH THIS!!! PLEASE, I BEG YOU!!!!

Her eyes were seething, but beneath Blaise could see a cloud of confusion, and was that a hint of lust?

Of course it was, Blaise. I mean, how could she not be lusting for you? Sex god. *wink*

Really, I loved this. I think you're very talented and don't need to be insecure about your writing. :) Continue this please! *begs*
I AM  YOUR WIFE!: Adam - YES!eckerlilas on February 7th, 2006 03:35 am (UTC)
I will finish it! Not today, but I promise I will.

Thanks for the encouragement, luv. I am quite insecure, and this was a big step for me. You have no idea!!!

Mmmm...well, if you're going to beg *smirk*
zaralya on February 7th, 2006 03:25 pm (UTC)
Yeah, I am going to beg - quite shamelessly. ;)
dixi19 on February 6th, 2006 11:47 pm (UTC)
TEASE!!!!! I thought you loved us. You're going to leave it like that?! NO.

Woman. It is your duty to finish this fic. You have a wonderful start...and no, I'm not blowing smoke...if I didn't like it I would pretend like I hadn't seen it. *is passive* Unless you asked and then I'd be honest...nice, but honest.

Okay my dear. Here is what I do when I'm totally stuck. Masturbate.

Stop laughing.

No really stop.

What I mean, is play it out in your head...visualize the whole scene and then just type like a fucking maniac and then masturbate. Shelf for a few hours or a day and then go back and read it, and that can help give a fresh look at the things you knew didn't sound right but didn't want to interrupt your flow. That's the key, just get it all out, and then worry about it later. It's like painting your nails, you don't get each one perfect before moving on, you do them all and then you come back with the Q-tip.

*gives strange analogies*

So yes, go forth and finsih. You really do have a great start here.

*will shut up now*
I AM  YOUR WIFE!: Adam teh dancereckerlilas on February 7th, 2006 03:38 am (UTC)
Hehe...I'm not so much a tease as someone who was suddenly dry in the inspiration department. That's what I get for writing and posting at work (naughty naughty Shonna).

I love y'all more than you even know! I promise that I will finish this, it just won't be today.

*snort* Masturbate, huh. I'm not laughing, I getting mental images. *smirk*

*loves your analogies* *loves you even more*

Thank you so much. Positive comments from you and Becky are like crack to me. *nods*

*hugs tightly*
Buffay the Vampyre Layer: GEN Ankh/Shonna/Kaciguest_age on February 7th, 2006 03:44 am (UTC)
Ah! You killed me! I am dead, dead, dead! Oh, Shonna that was sooooo good! When you were telling me about it on the phone, you didn't do it justice! Oh, you HAVE to finish it now! Yay!
I AM  YOUR WIFE!: Ankh/Shonna/Kaci are my OT3eckerlilas on February 7th, 2006 04:08 am (UTC)
Thanks luv, so much!

Well, I won't be finishing it now, but I promise to try to finish it tomorrow. Sorry to tease everyone so.

Annikabruisesonguitar on February 7th, 2006 10:58 am (UTC)
ummm I'm scared because my brain is going *guh* and it's HET...*does a double take* that means you must be doing something right hun.

The tension is wonderful and again you've reinforced the fact that everyone writes with a different style. There is no right or wrong. ♥

and OMFG icon LOVE!
I AM  YOUR WIFE!: Ankh/Shonna/Kaci are my OT3eckerlilas on February 7th, 2006 01:02 pm (UTC)
*hugs you tightly* I am just dying here because I wrote het and you read it anyway! *dies*

I really appreciate your approval on this, you have no idea.

And OMG, I made Ankh go *guh* over a het fic! I am blushing like crazy!

*loves*
witchiepoohwitchiepooh on March 12th, 2006 04:17 pm (UTC)
That was fantastic! I don't think you necessarily need to pick up this particular fic, but perhaps use it as a segue into something you can develop further.

As I already mentioned, it is very evocative and you really capture the moment. Great work!